Sunday, September 2, 2012

Day 3-Loneliness




           This was written for day three of the month-long haiku challenge at          Haiku Heights  

   The topic is 'loneliness' and I'm not sure about this one at all. I had some trouble with it but here goes....




               


Creator


Alone, You
fill empty spaces
with flowers.






9 comments:

  1. Beautiful. I will meditate on this when I have time.

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  2. Oh thank God someone 'fills empty spaces with flowers'! I like the quality in your haiku that tries to keep loneliness away.

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  3. Delightful, simply delightful...because it is filled with surprises!

    A Long Loneliness

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  4. This is so inspiring....Very beautiful thought...

    Lonely girl

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  5. your haiku is a guiding star showing us the way that how beautifully all of us can fill the empty spaces of our lives...thanks for such wonderful guidance..

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  6. A nice one indeed. I would like to use it to contemplate and meditate on our Creator ... very well done.

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  7. What a wonderful thing to fill the spaces with! I like that surprise ending :-)

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