Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Sea Chantey



A fluted conch
whispers ocean's sonata
into a child's ear.





This was written as a response to the prompt 'symphony',  for Haiku Heights.  




20 comments:

  1. Very good. I enjoyed this one - I can feel and hear the ocean.

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  2. I can hear it too--sweet music signed into an ear!

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  3. Into our ears as well if we are willing to hear. Very nice haiku.

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  4. Great capture of a child's magical world.

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  5. Amazing sounds from a conch is mysteriously lingering. Nature and its wonder. Nicely Barbara!

    Hank

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  6. Nice use of the child's ear

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  7. Very well crafted haiku. love the child image

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  8. Awesome! So simple and yet so eloquent.

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  9. Oh, I love this one. I particularly like the use of the word fluted. Wow! This is great!

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  10. Wonderful interpretation of the prompt.


    Melanie

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  11. I like the whispering..beautiful!!

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  12. Love it :) The ocean would sound amazing.

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  13. I really adore this image! Nice one, Barbara!

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  14. Lovely, simply lovely. Thank you for sharing this soft little symphony with us.

    Symphony of Seeds

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  15. Beautifully imagined

    http://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/

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  16. LOVE it!! \\(^-^)// I use to love to put a conch shell up to my ear!! Never could figure it out!!
    September Heights - Repertoire of Notes

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  17. Beautiful! The ocean and the child - two equally mighty concepts.

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