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Yeah I too heard birds feel the rain first... Lovely compositionbeautifully crafted :)
Picturesque :-)
beautifully composed, Barbara. I really like the feeling it evokes.
I like this one - the dove flicking its tail especially.
Great composition. I wasn't aware that birds feel the rain first. Very evocative haiku.
I love it :) This is serene, and in spirit of the haiku too.
I love this - it reminds me of the morning doves in my yard. A well crafted haiku.
I really love this! Did not know about the birds feeling the drops first. Thank you for sharing.
Love the beautiful images in this!
I can see the tail flicking! Nice!
I love how a dove reacts to what it knows is coming. You portrayed it well.
a gorgeous haiku - I wish I'd written it!
nice composition...I like the flicking tail... :)
Fine imagery
I can almost picture the birds flicking off the rain.... beautifully captured!
Such a delicate picture you create with your words!Seven Rains
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Yeah I too heard birds feel the rain first... Lovely composition
ReplyDeletebeautifully crafted :)
Picturesque :-)
ReplyDeletebeautifully composed, Barbara. I really like the feeling it evokes.
ReplyDeleteI like this one - the dove flicking its tail especially.
ReplyDeleteGreat composition. I wasn't aware that birds feel the rain first. Very evocative haiku.
ReplyDeleteI love it :) This is serene, and in spirit of the haiku too.
ReplyDeleteI love this - it reminds me of the morning doves in my yard. A well crafted haiku.
ReplyDeleteI really love this! Did not know about the birds feeling the drops first. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLove the beautiful images in this!
ReplyDeleteI can see the tail flicking! Nice!
ReplyDeleteI love how a dove reacts to what it knows is coming. You portrayed it well.
ReplyDeletea gorgeous haiku - I wish I'd written it!
ReplyDeletenice composition...I like the flicking tail... :)
ReplyDeleteFine imagery
ReplyDeleteI can almost picture the birds flicking off the rain.... beautifully captured!
ReplyDeleteSuch a delicate picture you create with your words!
ReplyDeleteSeven Rains
Sweeet!!!
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