This was written for day three of the month-long haiku challenge at Haiku Heights
The topic is 'loneliness' and I'm not sure about this one at all. I had some trouble with it but here goes....
Creator
Alone, You
fill empty spaces
with flowers.
Beautiful. I will meditate on this when I have time.
ReplyDeleteVery thoughtful, BHN!
ReplyDeleteOh thank God someone 'fills empty spaces with flowers'! I like the quality in your haiku that tries to keep loneliness away.
ReplyDeleteDelightful, simply delightful...because it is filled with surprises!
ReplyDeleteA Long Loneliness
This is so inspiring....Very beautiful thought...
ReplyDeleteLonely girl
your haiku is a guiding star showing us the way that how beautifully all of us can fill the empty spaces of our lives...thanks for such wonderful guidance..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words.
ReplyDeleteA nice one indeed. I would like to use it to contemplate and meditate on our Creator ... very well done.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful thing to fill the spaces with! I like that surprise ending :-)
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