Friday, September 28, 2012

Still................................



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howling wind still screams
across a combat zone
trampled lilies

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Today's prompt at HAIKU HEIGHTS is 'battlefield.'  






13 comments:

  1. So nice how you evoked Lillies of the Field without mentioning it directly.
    Excellent haiku

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  2. Podoba Ci się ta zabawa, więc ciesz się nią i baw się dobrze. Pozdrawiam
    Do you like this game, so enjoy it and have fun. Yours.

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  3. Lillies on the field of honour. All what remains. Awesome haiku.

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  4. A perfect haiku. Beautifully done :-)

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  5. Normally ground zero suffers but the damage is seldom made known. Nicely Barbara!

    Hank

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  6. Trampled Lilies- just two words - create a whole picture! Well done.

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  7. Combat zones don't deserve lilies.

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  8. That's such a lovely, sensitive yet powerful haiku.

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  9. its sad but you have written it wonderfully..

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