Thursday, September 27, 2012

Waltz



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two kites sway
on a dancing breeze
one-two-three

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Today's prompt for HAIKU HEIGHTS is 'waltz.'







21 comments:

  1. Waltzing kites! That's such a pretty image, Barbara.

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  2. "on a dancy breeze" -- perfect words to describe it.

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  3. What a wonderful waltzing image of kites. Awesome take on waltz.

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  4. Beautiful. Love the counting in the last line.

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  5. Enjoyed this - simple and subtle.

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  6. Love this image, I can picture those waltzing kites.

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  7. That's how it started - the counting! Thanks for the memory, Barbara!

    Hank

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  8. Cute! One-two-three I feel like dancing myself :)

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  9. Beautiful Haiku, but it rhymes. Lol! Nice piece :)

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  10. Wow Barbara, I really loved that..one two three... :)it brought back some memories

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  11. Kites waltzing ... now that's beautiful !!!

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  12. That is a vivid image, and waltzing is a great description of the swooping of the kites.

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  13. Wonderful interpretation! Waltzing kites! I can picture it!

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  14. I never would have thought of the Waltz of the Kites--but thankfully you did!

    Wilderness Waltz

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  15. A waltz has always been my favorite! Nicely done :-)

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  16. What a fun, creative take on the prompt! Lovely.

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