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Wow, simply beautiful. I can see the brightness of the stars without a moon, and feel the quiet as everything looks up.
I like the way the main topic is unsaid - it works very well.
Like silence when we least expect it.
Beautiful and subtle. I like it a lot.
Simple yet beautiful image ~
Oh, I really like this one.
I'm trying to decide if it is a star filled night without the moon or a moonless and starless night. Lovely, either way!
Thanks for your comments. Perhaps I need another word to clarify the moment I was trying to capture. I live near a big city and rarely get to see themilky way in all its glory, in the desert with no moon..I am learning so much at Haiku Heights!! Thanks again!
WOW! Such a nice haiku ... almost in the spirit of the ancient classical haiku masters such as Basho and Buson. Very wel written and in balance ... in some way traditional ... chapeau!
That is exactly what I was aiming for. Thank you for kind words!
I agree with Kris.. a spirit of haiku in this for sure :) Admirable.
Allow me, please, to join in agreeing as well. The spirit of the masters shines through this piece!Milky Way
Thank you for your kind words, I really appreciate them.
I like to imagine that nightingale pausing to look up. Its eyes and tail must coordinate beautifully.
Beautiful ... really well written !!!
Simple and powerful. Finely written.
so good! I love the unexpected second image!
Silent night...I can feel the silence..amazing ..
This is gorgeous! I love the idea of pausing to look up, a stillness and an action. Beautiful.
What a beautiful image! The full moon last weekend was amazing. Thank you for your lovely words.
Simply beautiful :)