Thursday, September 13, 2012

Revelation





At dawn,
a billowing nightgown
pulls weeds






Today's poem is in response to the prompt 'revelation' at HAIKU HEIGHTS  A departure for me today.  A senryu, perhaps?












17 comments:

  1. I love that image of billowing nightgown ~ a gem to read ~

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  2. Nicely composed haiku/senryu ... love the imagery of the nightgown.

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  3. I second that, Grace, a very lovely image.

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  4. Love the image I see when I read your words. Excellent.


    Melanie

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  5. (tee hee) Yes, we did take a similar approach to the prompt. I love the billowing nightgown too.

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  6. wow. this is very beautiful, Barbara :)

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  7. I love this picture, too. Very nicely done.

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  8. A windy night apparently! Nicely, Barbara!

    Hank

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  9. Is the nightgown barefoot too? Love your take!

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  10. I too love "the billowing nightgown " ..wonderful :)

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  11. Gosh! who would have thought! Lovely!

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  12. All the beautiful things that surround us every day, and Haiku empowers us to see them...It is truly amazing.

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  13. the image is so beautifully woven....I see a night-gowned woman who is an insomniac!

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