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Like it! Great haiku ...
I like this too - a wistful and original take on the prompt.
Perfect haiku, love it,,,,
I love this! ... don't be offended but I thought there would be a photo and recipe for fish and chips ... in that newspaper ...
Ha! That is really funny! One of the things I love about poetry. It can often be read in so many ways!
'Old dreams of the sea' I love this line; sends me to the pages of sea adventure books.
Great interpretation of the prompt.
Lovely haiku....So beautifully done..Life of paper boat
simple and pleasant !!! :)
Love it - so imaginative.
A great imagery ... loved this one !!!
"a paper sailor", you have played wonderfuly with words, very original take on the prompt.:)
I read this many times ... it's so poignant!
I totally love all the layers of paper and boat and yesterday and retirement.
How original. Great take on the prompt
I like the folding of old dreams in yesterday's news ~ Good one ~
Bravo, excellent Haiku!You bring words alive in five,seven,and five. I could see it, feel it, and indeed live in that moment.
Barbara, you are rocking these haikus! I like the folding of old dreams in yesterday's news too. Great wordplay and creative. :-)
Very nice. Excellent imagery.
I love your twist on the prompt, simply love it!Paper Boat