Friday, September 7, 2012

Ars Poetica?




A single moment
in seventeen syllables
haiku




A challenging prompt today for Haiku Heights.  Here's my rendering.









18 comments:

  1. Haiku defined in a haiku ... well done :-)

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  2. Lovely. I laughed. We are having such neat solutions to a difficult challenge!

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  3. This is what we are trying to succeed at this month. Well done.

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  4. Oh, nice! I love the single moment.

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  5. Great! loved what you "rendered"
    thanks for reading and commenting on my stuff.. appreciate your kindness

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  6. simple and to the point of the point!

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  7. Really to the point this one ... very well and strongly written.

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  8. wow haiku in a haiku...cleverly done..

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  9. I should have done something like you did with today's prompt rather than stare at google... this was fun :D

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  10. deeply inspired and masterfully rendered

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  11. How lovely :D Strong and simple.

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  12. But, but, but, you have only 14 syllables! :)


    Render

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    1. Very good catch, Mark! You are the first to notice. I toyed with putting 'or less' in but did not like it as much. Most of my haiku are 11 to 14 syllables. Thanks for visiting!

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