Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Forecast

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Soft gray clouds 
 mourning dove flicks its tail
at the first drops





The prompt at Haiku Heights  for today, is 'rain.'  




17 comments:

  1. Yeah I too heard birds feel the rain first... Lovely composition
    beautifully crafted :)

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  2. beautifully composed, Barbara. I really like the feeling it evokes.

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  3. I like this one - the dove flicking its tail especially.

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  4. Great composition. I wasn't aware that birds feel the rain first. Very evocative haiku.

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  5. I love it :) This is serene, and in spirit of the haiku too.

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  6. I love this - it reminds me of the morning doves in my yard. A well crafted haiku.

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  7. I really love this! Did not know about the birds feeling the drops first. Thank you for sharing.

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  8. Love the beautiful images in this!

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  9. I love how a dove reacts to what it knows is coming. You portrayed it well.

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  10. a gorgeous haiku - I wish I'd written it!

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  11. nice composition...I like the flicking tail... :)

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  12. I can almost picture the birds flicking off the rain.... beautifully captured!

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  13. Such a delicate picture you create with your words!

    Seven Rains

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  14. Sweeet!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/and-i-fell-in-love.html

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