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Oh, this is great. I love the use of the word "spent." I love the bed makes me think of flower beds as well as the kind we sleep in. I love how the first line sets the tone. No doubt about it . . . masterfully done!
Beautifully done! Makes me sigh with contentment.
Wonderfully written !!!
Super haiku - I enjoyed the gentle side of nature expressed in this. Top class!
Oh, barbara, I love the word play in this. Wonderful haiku.
This is really a nice haiku. love the way you have used the prompt in such a natural way. Strong and beautiful. Great imagery you have painted here with your words. Almost like the classical masters.
How loving! A blend of 2 hearts! Nicely Barbara!Hank
It would be nice to fall asleep in a bed of flowers under the moonlight. Lovely haiku :)
A real flower bed! Wish I were a leaf :)
Uh-oh, horticultural hanky-panky... (snicker) Seriously, I like this a lot.
Wish I sleep on that bed beautifully decorated by nature....Pleasant haiku Barbara!
A spent leaf - incredible!love your interrpretation
superb imagination...and nicely woven...loved it :)
A great take and play on words
This is beautiful! I can picture it.. the moonlight, the arc of the leaf's fall and that lovely bed.
I can see and feel something delicate, evanescent and yet, lingers.
I would like to be there! Lovely indeed.:)
Awesome image in words!
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