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Fly prism is an amazing play with words !!!
Wonderfully composed ... a really good haiku ... a classical haiku ... could have been written by a haiku master.
Wow! Very well-crafted! :) Jingles of celebration!
Wonderful. I had to think about it. I like that. Fantastic image.
I like this line very much - reflecting a million suns. :-)
A beautiful and perfect haiku. So nice to see.
Needed several reads to absorb this - and when I did it was worth it. A lovely original description, succinctly done.
Fly prism, I can picture the scene! A kaleidoscope of colors! Nicely Barbara!Hank
great! I echo all the above comments.
This is so good. I love the first two lines.
I have to tell you...This is different!!!http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/lights-on.html
Terrific haiku, classic, deep, one of the best I've read up to now about Lights.Brilliant!
'Fly prism', that's a fantastic description of a spider web. Very original.
Very vivid and well written
Oh I like this very much. Such a beautiful image in so little words. Excellent.Melanie
Excellent! All three lines. I like the idea of 'a million suns.'
So very clever!! I love the fly prism.
well penned.love the imagery..invite you to share a haiku or a poem with poets rally today.