Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Catching the Light


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dewy spider web
reflecting a million suns
in a fly prism


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Today the prompt for HAIKU HEIGHTS is 'lights.'


21 comments:

  1. Fly prism is an amazing play with words !!!

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  2. Wonderfully composed ... a really good haiku ... a classical haiku ... could have been written by a haiku master.

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  3. Wonderful. I had to think about it. I like that. Fantastic image.

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  4. I like this line very much - reflecting a million suns. :-)

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  5. A beautiful and perfect haiku. So nice to see.

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  6. Needed several reads to absorb this - and when I did it was worth it. A lovely original description, succinctly done.

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  7. Fly prism, I can picture the scene! A kaleidoscope of colors! Nicely Barbara!

    Hank

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  8. great! I echo all the above comments.

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  9. This is so good. I love the first two lines.

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  10. I have to tell you...
    This is different!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/lights-on.html

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  11. Terrific haiku, classic, deep, one of the best I've read up to now about Lights.
    Brilliant!

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  12. 'Fly prism', that's a fantastic description of a spider web. Very original.

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  13. Oh I like this very much. Such a beautiful image in so little words. Excellent.

    Melanie

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  14. Excellent! All three lines. I like the idea of 'a million suns.'

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  15. So very clever!! I love the fly prism.

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  16. well penned.

    love the imagery..

    invite you to share a haiku or a poem with poets rally today.

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