A friend suggested that Friday's post entitled Picking Flowers was a poem waiting to happen. I agree. So, always up for a challenge, I began to think about a poem based on a poet's garden walk. Before I had time to write the poem, my three-year -old grandson arrived for an overnight stay and as the weekend unfolded, my poem took shape.
Writing poetry gives me great pleasure, if not great poetry. The joy comes from the satisfaction of capturing a fleeting moment in words.
Grandmother's Flowers
Once she gathered dandelions,
to carry home to mother
fashioning a tiny bouquet.
Soon those yellow treasures
turned to roadside weeds
and childhood flew away.
Then came her oldest daughter
with a bunch of heady lilacs
on a sunny spring day.
Her daughter grew up
moved to New York City,
another childhood put away.
Then came her oldest daughter
with a bunch of heady lilacs
on a sunny spring day.
Her daughter grew up
moved to New York City,
another childhood put away.
Today she wanders
through a garden gate
thinking of that dandelion day
while she helps a little boy gather
pink blossoms and rose buds
the colors of a summer day.
Now the boy named Henry
carries flowers home to mother,
his own handpicked nosegay.
Grandmother savors this moment
soon to be a memory
another childhood hurries away.
another childhood hurries away.
Do you ever write poetry?
I think this may be a draft. There is more to the poem and I plan to work it out at some point.
ReplyDeleteAs a writer, Don, you can appreciate that the rewriting is the real work. For me, it is as relaxing as weeding!
Wow another metaphor! Writing is planting seeds, rewriting is the weeding, the poem is (if you're lucky), the flower or fruit. I like that!
Thanks for your encouragement, Don.
Writing is planting seeds, rewriting is the weeding ... LOL, Most visitors to my FaceBook page find where I refer to myself as "The grower of the unknown seed." Most think it refers to my organic gardening. In fact it refers to my writing. The poem had it's genisis as an exercise for Mary's class. I plan to read "I am the grower of the unknown seed" on Tuesday the 26th of June at the Bellmore Library's, Tuesdays with Poetry, open mic segment.
ReplyDeleteOpen Mic... that sounds intimidating. Is there really a microphone? Good luck.
DeleteI love the truthfully repeated gathering and gift of flowers and growing up. Though the idea of value--dandelions or roses--changes over the years, the cycle of childhood and growing up in humans and flowers and writing and all continues. I thank God for that.
ReplyDeleteBut probably, the dandelions were the most precious gift, in an odd sort of way... Lovely bit of poetic nostalgia.
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