Friday, October 12, 2012

After Basho



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No poppies bloom
in warm October light
daisies stand in

daisies speak
their own silent words
to open hearts

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19 comments:

  1. I am glad to see you here on Carpe Diem Barbara. These haiku are wonderfully composed and so in touch with the haiku by Basho. I can see you were inspired by the haiku of Basho. It's in the spirit of Basho. Thank you for sharing.

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  2. welcome barbara to haiku my heart! so glad to have you join our friday gathering. a bright circle where i hope you will find yourself warmly received! love your ode to the simplicity of daises.

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  3. Love the silent words of daisies. Daisies standing in is very Basho.

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  4. Lovely in word and image... these daisies opening to this change in season...

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  5. So true...I speak the language of daisies as well.

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  6. yes, daisies will have to do! wonderful haiku

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  7. W Twoje serce stokrotka mówi pewno same miłe słowa. Pozdrawiam.
    In your heart tells Daisy sure the same kind words. Yours.

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  8. Glad there are still daisies here too

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  9. I came and stopped by to hear and learn. I like daisies. I like poppies too! I like your haiku.

    Peace

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  10. Love both verses, Barbara...doncha just love daisies too? They just keep blooming and blooming even when it's frosty. ♥

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  11. lovely haiku ~ love the daisies and poppies ~ (A Creative Harbor)

    thanks for coming by and commenting ^_^

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  12. When daisies speak, who listens? Only those with hearts tuned aright.

    White Poppy

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  13. daisies speak
    yes
    with
    soft petal
    words ...


    so glad
    i popped in here!

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