tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post5051001976271696188..comments2023-03-29T05:30:19.896-04:00Comments on The Healthy Nut: HomeBarbarahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13843100240748270890noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-19894301889522915482012-10-12T00:59:33.537-04:002012-10-12T00:59:33.537-04:00Such truth in few syllables.Such truth in few syllables.Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-35322100682108494652012-10-09T07:31:46.187-04:002012-10-09T07:31:46.187-04:00lovely imagerylovely imageryReading Pleasurehttp://readinpleasure.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-14703957686519464682012-10-09T07:27:32.876-04:002012-10-09T07:27:32.876-04:00Lovely word-picture! Soft and subtle!Lovely word-picture! Soft and subtle!Jollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08072901017811869958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-59472086370887251202012-10-09T07:27:20.782-04:002012-10-09T07:27:20.782-04:00Lovely word-picture! Soft and subtle!Lovely word-picture! Soft and subtle!Jollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08072901017811869958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-77274109820351876262012-10-09T05:13:41.607-04:002012-10-09T05:13:41.607-04:00Beautiful imagery, Barbara. You can still write ab...Beautiful imagery, Barbara. You can still write about the sparrow..<br /><br />a sparrow flies<br />in and out of the cedar<br />gathering darkness<br /><br />Nice contrast... Also, the element of mystery. The reader may think which is gathering the darkness. :-)Christine "Chrissi" L. Villahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17834613429230278257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-85393874706965849522012-10-08T18:36:21.945-04:002012-10-08T18:36:21.945-04:00Interesting. Thank you for this comment. I have ...Interesting. Thank you for this comment. I have another version of this poem. <br /> <br /> a bird flies <br /> in and out of the cedar<br /> gathering darkness<br /> <br />But this did not reflect what I actually saw, which was a series of birds flying into their roosting spot in the cedar for the night. Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843100240748270890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-54941784185577314302012-10-08T17:19:06.981-04:002012-10-08T17:19:06.981-04:00For a beginner, Barbara, I think you are following...For a beginner, Barbara, I think you are following the "rules" quite well!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-72473539006855843632012-10-08T17:18:18.054-04:002012-10-08T17:18:18.054-04:00Is it the sparrow or the cedar gathering darkness?...Is it the sparrow or the cedar gathering darkness? I suppose it doesn't really matter, for darkness is overtaking both, and the little bird needs to find its way home before it can no longer see to fly...<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/10/08/who-3/" rel="nofollow"><b>Desert Home</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-70971863954921624412012-10-08T16:29:17.255-04:002012-10-08T16:29:17.255-04:00Giga, thank you for visiting. What I have been w...Giga, thank you for visiting. What I have been writing is haiku. This is a form of poetry from the Japanese and I am quite sure that the google translator makes it difficult for you to understand what I have written. I am also a beginner so I don't know how well I am succeeding in following the 'rules' of haiku! Thanks for reading though!Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843100240748270890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-27002984856927903592012-10-08T13:01:07.284-04:002012-10-08T13:01:07.284-04:00Nie znając języka, tłumacz Google tu nie pomoże, t...Nie znając języka, tłumacz Google tu nie pomoże, trudno zrozumieć zabawę. Pozdrawiam więc serdecznie i przesyłam buziaka. <br />Not knowing the language, Google translator will not help, it's hard to understand the game. So I greet warmly and sending a kiss.Gigahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08706670738884178087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-5813172682251566662012-10-08T01:31:40.911-04:002012-10-08T01:31:40.911-04:00really nice use of a sparrow flyingreally nice use of a sparrow flyingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-43347206868221909522012-10-07T21:20:54.832-04:002012-10-07T21:20:54.832-04:00Beautiful haikuBeautiful haikurallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-88146043419626715632012-10-07T17:47:15.464-04:002012-10-07T17:47:15.464-04:00White cedar gathering darkness -- such a beautiful...White cedar gathering darkness -- such a beautiful combination of words and imageryJudith Westerfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02705424225908751261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-6779666819076125012012-10-07T15:59:38.856-04:002012-10-07T15:59:38.856-04:00A painting in words, I agreeA painting in words, I agreeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-57904787725670738222012-10-07T10:19:18.296-04:002012-10-07T10:19:18.296-04:00Love the word-play!!!
Live to die at home!Love the word-play!!!<br /><br /><a href="http://miracleshappen13.blogspot.in/2012/10/live-to-die-at-home.html" rel="nofollow">Live to die at home!</a>Pranitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15561255344238245261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-44561111105998579262012-10-07T07:16:20.617-04:002012-10-07T07:16:20.617-04:00Awesome 'word-painting' well done.Awesome 'word-painting' well done.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-48470337414983326302012-10-07T05:14:39.279-04:002012-10-07T05:14:39.279-04:00So lovely, Barbara, whiteness outside and the litt...So lovely, Barbara, whiteness outside and the little bird gathering the dark inside.<br />Dulcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804606583762933316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-55625853594859198792012-10-07T04:37:27.181-04:002012-10-07T04:37:27.181-04:00Love yours - ♥Love yours - ♥MamaTimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14345478631715131081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-35766386331526788752012-10-07T01:14:50.876-04:002012-10-07T01:14:50.876-04:00beautiful imagery..loved it !!beautiful imagery..loved it !!odyzzhttp://odizzey.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-62796932787094126942012-10-06T15:20:18.211-04:002012-10-06T15:20:18.211-04:00Perfection, haiku-wise.Perfection, haiku-wise.Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2012/10/06/haven/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-62026084666497109222012-10-06T14:44:51.780-04:002012-10-06T14:44:51.780-04:00Lovely haiku ~ I like the contrast of cedar and d...Lovely haiku ~ I like the contrast of cedar and darkness ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3161861959181130253.post-69983090980021471552012-10-06T14:14:01.904-04:002012-10-06T14:14:01.904-04:00I love this imageryI love this imageryAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14000820772202105961noreply@blogger.com